Careful Destiny Part One - Comments

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Comments by WarlockRebirth on Monday, August 29, 2005 at 22:58 IP Logged

Read this story along time ago and was browsing the web when i came upon your site i was glad to see you've continued again keep it up.

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Comments by Rubberneck on Tuesday, August 23, 2005 at 09:01 IP Logged

I really, really, really liked this story. It was brilliant and I hope to read more of it. Still, Ranma did seem to somewhat regret losing his female side, as if it was to lose a part of himself. Maybe that will be the reason he has to use the second wish?? I don't know, but I will read more if you post more. ^^

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Comments by kaida on Tuesday, June 01, 2004 at 17:15 IP Logged

wow! this is a pretty good story. i like it. I only hope that u continued, because I see all the updates are from '96. if not, u should.

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Comments by Ace A on Thursday, April 22, 2004 at 12:12 IP Logged

Good story, good execution and very good writing.

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Comments by Will Leung on Saturday, April 03, 2004 at 07:11 IP Logged

Excellent, a brilliant flow... I definitely look forward to the next one.

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Comments by dogbertcarroll on Friday, May 09, 2003 at 20:45 IP Logged

Wow. I am impressed. Damn good story.

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Comments by Ramza on Monday, February 17, 2003 at 11:57 IP Logged

I love this story. IT is abosulty brellint. Note I have read all six curent parts. A few things that you might want tow be awarwer of. first. Part 2. Change the fight secen with kuno. Add More spicelecs to make it more undoutable. Part 6 is real hard to read and follow what happens. Wriet a short side story that brefley describpes the week. I know my spellings horabel.
Ramza

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Comments by Chryo on Thursday, October 11, 2001 at 18:22 IP Logged

Kickin'. 'Bout time I read some more Ranma fanfics. And this definitely was a good one to start with.

Although, as everybody knows, the "wish" concept is a tad overdone. But the rest of the story works out well.

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Comments by LSMcGill on Friday, May 04, 2001 at 10:11 IP Logged

Humm... My my, something I'd thought I'd never see... a story that draws me in the way Mirrors Multipled did... Thank you. This kind of writing is what I love. This is what I wrote my story to try and be...

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Comments by Poe man15 on Wednesday, September 20, 2000 at 16:09 IP Logged

That was the best Ranma story I have ever read! MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMORE!!!!!

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