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| Comments by
LN on Friday, September 01, 2006 at 22:51 |
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Wow, I read your stuff years ago (like 96/97). I'm happily surprised that you're still writing! Really great storyline. I love reading your writing. Keep it up! Hopefully you'll have part 8 soon!
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Robert on Tuesday, May 16, 2006 at 00:10 |
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I really loved it and i can't wait till i can read the next part , it's really interesting and has a nice plot, i'll be checking every once in a while to see whats new. you have real talent.
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ibraha01 on Monday, March 20, 2006 at 09:50 |
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i really loved it and i can't wait till i can read the next part , it's really interesting and has a nice plot, i'll be checking every once in a while to see whats new.
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| Comments by
Eric on Friday, January 27, 2006 at 12:56 |
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Yay part 7! Finding an update was a nice surprise; like others, I had assumed the story was dead. (As a fan of Careless Destiny,) I also approved of Ranko dumping Hikaru.
Something I've been meaning to ask about CD: how much of it do you have planned out? Is there going to be a tidy wrap-up to the wish, or was it just a plot device to trigger the story?
I hope you soon find the time and energy to write further chapters!
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| Comments by
gahn on Monday, December 12, 2005 at 22:42 |
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woot! Part 7 ist out!
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| Comments by
dennisud on Wednesday, October 05, 2005 at 20:25 |
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its been a while since I found this story (About 3 years) and a while since you updated so I was very happy to see chapter 7.
Ok Koadahi and the Mobsters should be interesting for Ranma, Ranko and the rest to deal with. I really hate the Kunos here  worse than the series which I'm sure you wanted.
Nabiki getting her cherry popped by gos really gives me the shivers. I really like either if the three Tendo sisters to get Ranma in the end and actually have been moving away from Akane. I can say only a few R/A stories intrigue me, your being in my top 5.
So Seeing Nabiki with of all people Hikaru, does piss me off a little.
But as long as she learns something here then I'll let it go for now.
Finally Kasumi IMHO knows muchn more than she shows in the series, or manga. She uses her Mioshi-Like look to see whats really there. I'd say keep an eye on her!
I think Kuno  could end up landing in a barrel of "Spring of two-toed Slough". Then he'd finally get a eyefull of how much of a A**Hole he is.
Getting Akane's virginity will be dealt with.
Finally Ranma will have to be truthful to Akane here or thing won't work, and Ranko should open her eyes and see who's she really needs to be with!
A great ACC in Sato BTW!
dennisud
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| Comments by
Virgil on Sunday, September 25, 2005 at 23:19 |
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I just wanted to say that it's good to have you back and thank you ever so much for this latest update to a Careful Destiny...Dude, seriously, this story kicks major butt! Lol, still even with the delays it was well worth the delay.
Now, onto the critique...I definitely like we're you're going with the story and you are right, lol..I did find the whole scene with Nabiki and Gosunkugi stomach turning..lol, seriously love Nabiki and she has always been my favorite female character in the Ranma cast...I had hoped that she and Sato would eventually work it out..Will any of the other cast members from Ranma's world be making an appearance in your story? I can only hope so, hehe..The meeting with Happosai should be fairly enlightening..! Anyways, good joba nd can't wait to see what you come out with next..Though we can only hope that it doesn't take forever, lol..
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| Comments by
Gareth on Wednesday, August 31, 2005 at 19:34 |
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Great story, its been a while since your last udate, but it was worth the wait.
Looking forward to the next part
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| Comments by
Jarkota on Wednesday, August 31, 2005 at 04:26 |
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I must say, I have thoroughly enjoyed this yarn you are spinning, which is something because I don't normally read tales this long given the lack of free time that I possess. However, you have successfully captured my interest with this one and I literally pulled an all-nighter to read it. I myself am working on a Ranma fic featuring a "Ranko Saotome" in something of a similar way that you have, and this story has greatly inspired me. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
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| Comments by
Damocles on Tuesday, August 30, 2005 at 12:51 |
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Great work. Though updates are few and far between, there is a quality in your work that I enjoy. Keep it up!
Just one thing, a typo:
the impact of which knocked her out cod.
That's all I caught really. :p Until, the next installment!
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